Cinquain Poems

4KM and 4KJ have been writing cinquain poems this week.

Cinquain poems have five lines and follow this structure:

Line 1: Noun or subject of poem (one word)

Line 2: Two adjectives that describe line 1

Line 3: Three verbs that describe line 1

Line 4: A short phrase about line 1

Line 5: A synonym of line 1 (one word)

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Here is a cinquain poem about Miss Jordan’s cat, Bella.

Bella

Cheeky, playful

Purring, eating, sleeping

Always full of energy

Cat

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Read some of our cinquain poems below…

 

What do you think of our cinquain poems?

Can you write a cinquain poem in your comment?

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36 thoughts on “Cinquain Poems

    • Dear Ethan,
      Thank you for commenting on our blog.
      The Poem about Miss Jordans cat was really good. Lots of people have a cat or a dog for a pet because they are very popular.

      My cat is very old mum bought her when she was a little girl and she is still with us now. Maxi is not very active but she does like to go for morning walks sometimes she goes again at night.

      From
      Maddy :mrgreen:

    • Dear Will,
      Thank you for commenting on our blog. All the poems from Miss Jordans grade was great I bet it took a lot of work to get them complited.

      From
      Maddy :mrgreen:

  1. Dear Miss Jordan,
    Hi Miss Jordan and I can write a cinquain poem and here it is.
    sand
    wet,dry
    sencking,building,killing
    thats a great sand castle
    bearch.
    do you like my poam?why or why not?
    From,
    cam.

    • Dear Cam,
      Thank you for commenting on our blog. The poems your class made are realy good. When the bell went for end of snack today I had a little peek at them and they lookedc realy good hanging up on the window.

      I like your poem because it is out of your head and your not copying anyone eles lots of people like poems that other people all teachers do as well but they like iit the most.
      From Maddy :mrgreen:

  2. Dear 4KM and 4KJ,

    Wow what a great post about cinquain poems I like the one about your cat. I did the bubble gum poem, this was gonna be my second cinquain poem:

    Cub
    soft,cuddly
    roaring,sleeping, catching
    I sleep in winter

    Bear

    from

    shakira :mrgreen:

    PS:hope you like it!

    • Dear Shakira,
      Thank you for commenting on our blog. Like I said to Cam I had a little peek at your poems while I was on my way to get a drink.

      I like your poem because it is realy crative and creative is good. It is good that you are making up another poem even though you hsve made one in class. It means that you are enjoying what you are learning in class.

      From
      Maddy

    • Dear Shakira,
      Thank you for commenting on our blog. Like I said to Cam when I was on my way to gert a drink I had a litle peek at your class poems and the were good.

      I like your poem because it is creative and I like creative. The part I like about it the most is that you made another poem even though you already did one in class that means that you are enjoying what you are learning in class.

      From Maddy

  3. Dear 4KM and 4KJ,

    What a wonderful post, Miss Jordan! I think the cinquain poems were great and I think it was a great idea to write them in class.

    My cinquain poems were about sport and summer. The summer one was in the post but I will tell you the sport one.

    Sport
    Attack, defence
    Catching, throwing, cheering
    Running around on the court
    Netball

    Do you like that cinquain poem?
    What did you do your cinquain poems about?

    From your classmate,
    Skye ♦

    • Dear Skye,
      Thank you for commenting on our blog. Miss Jordaan did a great job doing this post because she doesn’t have Mrs Morris to talk to about the blog and what to put on it.

      I like your poem because it sounds like grade five work because of the words you used in your poem. You did a great job on your poem and like I said to Shakira you must like learning at school.

      From Maddy

  4. Dear 4KM and 4KJ,
    I remember Miss. Jorden saying in class that her cat is more like a dog, the exact same as my cat.
    My cat is also attached to boxs. He tried to fit in a cearial box once! ๐Ÿ˜†

    Anyway, I didn’t come and leave a comment about cats, I came to leave a comment about the cinquain poems.

    My one was Library. The one that I liked the best was Bubble-gum.

    Your friend,
    Bronte ๐Ÿ™‚ :mrgreen:

    • Dear Bronte,

      What a wonderful comment!

      I think it would be funny having a pet acting like another pet. It was funny how Miss Jordan said that Bella her cat stares at her everywhere she goes.

      That is hilarious. I can’t believe your cat likes to go in ceral boxes. How does the ceral box get on the ground?

      I liked your cinquain poem. Shakira’s bubblegum poem was interesting but a great idea.

      From,
      Skye

      • Dear Skye,
        I have a pantry that has door and it’s always opened.

        The cat climbs into the pantry and knocks the box down and squishs inside it.
        He also likes to hop in bags to! ๐Ÿ˜†

        People think that he’s really fat, but he just has a thick coat.

        Your friend,
        Bronte P.S My cats name is Chester. PPS He actually looks like a Toby. ๐Ÿ™‚ :mrgreen:

    • Dear Bronte,
      Thank you for leaving a comment on the blog. I have never heard that a cat could be like a dog and a dog be like a cat. That is very weird of your cat trying to fit in cereal box so that is very interesting to hear.

      It is good that you didn’t visit the blog to just leave a comment about cat because I remember that Mrs Morris and Miss Jordan telling us that always writing a comment about the post not on a different topic.

      I realy like the bubble-gum poem you did it shows everyone that you realy care. I liked everyones poem they were also creative.

      From Maddy :mrgreen:

  5. Dear 4KM and 4KJ,

    Wow! What a great post! I love writing cinquain poems. I thought cinquain poems were a really cool type of poem because it was set out different, as most poems are set out the same.

    The poems were really interesting to read but Shakira’s especially stood out to me with her bubblegum words. I liked it because it had great words to go with it, like:
    โ™ฅ Chewy
    โ™ฅ Sticky
    โ™ฅ Munching
    โ™ฅ Blowing
    โ™ฅ Popping
    Also, I really loved Shakira’s phrase, ‘Don’t get it on your face!’ Aswell as Shakira’s, everyone else did a super job. Well done!

    Wow Miss Jordan, Bella is so cute! The photo of her in your black bag was extremely great. That’s funny how you said Bella just stares at you.

    This is my cinquain poem…
    Spring,
    Refreshing, bright,
    Blooming, hatching, gardening,
    A good season to fly a kite,
    Spring.

    At school, my cinquain poems were about school and winter. I chose winter for my good copy. This was how my poem about winter went…
    Winter,
    cold, icy,
    skiing, sculpting, cooking,
    the coldest season ever!
    Winter.

    What did you enjoy about writing cinquain poems?

    See you tomorrow!
    From,
    Liv ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Dear Liv,
      Wow what a qulity comment I also like your cinquain poem those were good words that you chose from cinquain poem.These are the words that I liked from your poem:
      ♥ scupltping
      ♥ icy
      &hearts skiing

      from your blogging buddy

      shakira :mrgreen:

      • Dear Shakira,

        Wow, what a kind reply I received! You are an awesome blogger and you leave great quality comments. Also, thanks for your nice compliments.

        I loved your bubblegum poem, it was very creative. I loved doing the cinquain poems. I thought they were lots of fun. I love writing poems and all types of text. What texts do you like to write?

        Talk soon!
        From,
        Liv ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Dear Liv,

      Wow whata qulity comment I lkie your both of your cinquain poems here are some of the words that I thought were intereting in your poem here it is:

      ♥ sculpting
      ♥ icy
      ♥ skiing

      from your blogging buddy

      shakira :mrgreen:

    • @olivia,
      Wow, what a great comment! All the Cinquain poems where great but I think shariaโ€™s standed out .Your pome was great. Why didnโ€™t you do that pome? My pome was on the post.I did another one at home about friends here It is:
      Friends
      Cheerful, awesome
      Playing, running, joking
      A time to talk about stuf

      Your blogging buddy,
      Olivia Y

      • Dear Liv,

        Wow! Another kind reply awaits me! You are an outstanding blogger and your comments really stand out.

        I agree, Shakira’s poem really stood out. I didn’t do the spring poem at school because I only thought of it when I was doing my comment.

        Your friends poem is very, very excellent. It makes sense, with words like:
        ~ Joking
        ~ Playing
        ~ Cheerful

        I love writing all types of text. What do you enjoy writing?

        From,
        Liv ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Dear Liv S,
      WOW what a great comment I bet you put a lot of effort into it. Thank you for commenting on the class blog. The favourite part about Cinquain Poem is that how the artist sets the whole thing out.

      All thepoems Miss Jordan’s class and ourshas tried their hardest and when they do that it makes the teachers happy and it makes yourself happy that you did a good job.

      It was nice for Miss Jordan to join in with the fun.

      From Maddy

  6. Dear 4KM,

    we decided to make a poem of
    our own about nature.

    here it is=

    Nature

    Wet,Healthy

    Calming, Energizing, Growing

    Always around me

    Enviroment

    from you bloging buddies,

    MRs rollinson and joshua.

    • Dear Mrs Rolinson and Josh,

      Thank you for a fantastic comment! ๐Ÿ™‚

      That poem is so awesome! I wish I could make a poem that good, but getting on with the comment I have though of a poem of my own:

      City
      Loud,Fun
      Shopping,Loving, Enjoying
      The busiest place in town.
      Country

      I hope you like my poem!

      From,
      Charlotte ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Hi guys,

    I am speechless, this such a fabulous post!

    I really loved working on the cinquain poems, it was a really great activity. I have to say I really liked Shakira’s poem, Cam’s poem and Skye’s poem. But everyone else had fantastic poems too. My poem was about rain and it was on the blog!

    Here are some of the describing I found in lots of peoples poems,
    * sticky
    * blowing
    * popping
    * glowing

    Got to go,
    Jess ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜Ž

  8. Dear 4KM & 4KJ
    I’ve enjoyed reading your poems. I think cinquains are great for making the writer think about their word choices.

    You have inspired me to try one of my own:

    Blogging
    Meaningful, addictive,
    Connecting, collaborating, creating.
    Makes our learning fun!
    Friendships.

    I hope you all have a great holiday break.
    Mrs McKenzie, B4

    • Dear Mrs McKenzie and B4,

      My name is Liv and I am in Miss Jordan’s class this year. I recently just earnt my own blog, http://livsblog.global2.vic.edu.au

      Wow! What a quality comment! It was so kind of you to come and leave it. We always love to hear from Blogging Buddies!

      I too think cinquain poems are very creative. I wonder who invented them? It was really fun making cinquain poems in class. We all came up with some great ideas and our classroom display will look fantastic.

      Your cinquain poem was very creative. I love it! Yes, you are right, blogging is addictive. I love making connections all around the world and collaborating with classes around the world also.

      My cinquain poem in class was:
      Winter,
      cold, icy,
      skiing, sculpting, cooking,
      The coldest season ever!
      Winter

      I love writing all types of texts. What is your favourite type of text tp write?

      From your new blogging buddy,
      Liv ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Dear Mrs McKenzie and B4,

      Thanks for leaving a marvellous comment on our blog! We love getting comments from our blogging buddies!

      I agree, cinquain poems are a great idea to let the writer think of interesting describing words. I think it is an excellent type of way to write a poem.

      I like your cinquain poem about blogging. It’s such a great topic. I like your phrase ‘Makes learning fun’.

      I wrote mine about summer and sport.

      From,
      Skye (4KJ)

  9. Dear 4KM and 4KJ,

    what a great post I loved it. It was really fun writing the cinquain poems. My poem was about school:
    School
    fun,fantastic
    learning,playing,reading
    A happy place to be
    Collage

    Some other poems I liked were:
    ♦ Bubble Gum ๐Ÿ˜Ž
    ♦ Fire ๐Ÿ˜†
    ♦ Library ๐Ÿ™‚
    ♦ Rain ๐Ÿ˜›

    I think everyone did a good job on there poems. My favourite poem was probally Shakira’s.

    Thats all for now.

    See you later!

    From your blogging buddy,
    Indi ๐Ÿ˜†

  10. Dear 4KM and 4KJ,

    I love the post. Writing the cinquain poems was a fun activity. My poem was about School.

    School
    fun,fantastic
    learning,playing,reading
    A happy place to be
    Collage

    Some of the poems I liked were:
    ♦ Bubble Gum ๐Ÿ˜Ž
    ♦ Library ๐Ÿ˜†
    ♦ Rain ๐Ÿ™‚
    ♦ Summer ๐Ÿ˜›

    My favourite one would probally have to be Shakira’s poem (Bubble Gum)

    Thats all for now.

    See you later!

    From your blogging buddy,
    Indi :mrgreen:

  11. Dear 4KM and 4KJ,

    Cinquain Poems are now my favroute type of poem.
    I think Cinquain Poems are fun to write and I might write one on the holidays,
    My poem was about Nachos it’s my favourite food.

    Everyone has done a great job on the Cinquain Poems,
    I hope we get to do another one!

    Sincerly
    L♥ren

  12. We really like your blog and we just started our own blog. Here is our cinque poem.
    5/6ml
    Awesome Smart
    learnng blogging creating
    having fun
    class

    Hope you visit our blog
    For 5/6ml this is Chuck & Pat =P

  13. Dear 4KM and 4KJ,

    What a great post! I really enjoyed writing Cinquain Poems. It was interesting to hear the other student’s topics for their Cinquain Poems in class. I think all the Cinquain Poems on the blog are fantastic!

    My two topics for the poem were a rabbit and a pool. For my good copy I did the pool one.

    Here it is:
    Pool
    Shiney, wet
    Swimming, diving, playing
    Splashing about having fun
    Leuisurelink

    From your friend,
    Sophie

  14. Hello 4KM and 4KJ,

    Cinquains
    Funny, interesting
    Thinking, planning, writing
    Sharing with the world
    Poetry

    Well done, everyone. I enjoyed reading your cinquains. ๐Ÿ™‚

    @RossMannell
    Teache, NSW, Australia

    • Hi Ross,
      thank you for your comment on our post.We enjoyed writing them
      have you writen a Cinquanin poem
      before?
      do you like cinquanin poems?
      from
      James 4KM

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